Hi Helaina , I really love your story especially how you used so many similes . Next time maybe you could add in some of your own pictures or spread out your information . Your story is very creative .
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Hi Helaina ,
ReplyDeleteI really love your story especially how you used so many similes . Next time maybe you could add in some of your own pictures or spread out your information . Your story is very creative .